Monday, March 9, 2009
My Glorious Moment
It was a bright sunny day,and I was at my house on the couch.I first just sat there but then my funny Dad came jolting in and started blabbering about something with the Olmpics.He rushes to the t.v remote and turns on ABC"I was creaming nooo!"As I turn around I see Michael Phelps swimming threw the great blue waters and is making history as he glides threw.I thoguht how grateful I was to see him make historey.
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3 comments:
nice words seems that you are happy in this poem thats good
justin
This poem had some sparkle words but you missed spelled two words. Screaming and history.Also put a period after ABC.
Anthony
I think it was really good.You used ba-ta-bing very well,buth yo could use more detail.
raven
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